Monday, December 27, 2010

Participle Poem

Bloom

I am a flower
Blossoming under the sun
Swaying with the breeze of life,
Waiting in the rain
for a glimpse of sunlight,
Catching morning dew amidst
the darkness,
Seeping in nutrients to fulfill my knowledge,
Growing stronger each day
I stand still,
As I watch myself blossom.



Draft

Reflection:

This was an assignment given to us by our teacher we were to think of an object, animal or an abstract idea that would best symbolize ourselves then make a participle poem following the example she has given.

In the process of making this poem I got to reflect on who I am  and I was able to make something creative out of it.




 



2 comments:

  1. You're poems are very good...

    But always remember that you can still improve your works!!!

    :)))

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  2. I like your poems!!! xD. They're very nice :)

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